
Dilema Volumetrico/Volumetric Dilemma
Ju Derraik
I waxed on about expressional economy.
You wanting to learn portuguese while
we’re entwined lakeside, talking through time:
stressed and syllabic.
English is curt. Each word. Onward.
It’s rigid like a pair of concrete birds
(Iambic Pentameter).
Shakespeare writes skull.
Portuguese strums, sliding open
billowing sounds, humming rounding
vowels languishing, lilting:
I sing to you ca-vei-ra.
Translators meet this dilemma:
how to mean less when you’re saying more,
to betray your own music for
music.
That sweet sorr-ow you’ve parted
is my tri-ste-za tão do-çe
and as the words spill out of me
time accents your leaving
end-stopped.
Here the revelation:
that writhing
dissonance stems
from my having said more
to you, my having meant less.
My tra-ge-di-a lasts
a beat longer than yours.
